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    reader1
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    Please recheck these two instances. Proof-reading corrections.

    1) “… of Bilal Abdul Kareem, and American citizen and journalist who had been the subject of five different US assassination attempt”

    Suggestion: replace the first ‘and’ with ‘an’

    2)”Stafford Smith spoke of use of Spanish Inquisition techniques, such as strapado, or hanging by the wrists until the shoulders slowly dislocate. He told of the torture of Binyam Mohammed, a British citizen….obligations to Binyam Mohammed, and had leaked to the BBC the statement he had been forced to confess to under torture, in order to discredit him.”

    Suggestion: Replace Binyam Mohammad with Binyam Mohamed.
    Link: https://www.therenditionproject.org.uk/prisoners/binyam-mohamed.html

    #59409 Reply
    mods-cm-org
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    Thank you. The text has been duly amended.

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